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Beatles Group Writing!
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Dr Winston o Boogie
Strawberry Fields... Forever
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10 May 2014 - 2.40pm

This is my first thread!

The idea in this is to write a story continually as a group. You write one to three sentences and then the next person, who continues the story. The goal is to write a solid, interesting 2-3 paragraph short story. You may continue the previous passage in a spontaneous way, or a way that flows and makes sense. I'll start it off:

Once upon a time... there was a world with no Mark Chapman and no lung cancer. It's 1981, and there has been many up cries for a Beatles reunion. Could the four boys who took the world by storm in the 1960's possibly reunite?

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I don't expect you... to understand after you've caused so much pain. But then again, you're just a human... a victim of the insane.

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Starr Shine?
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10 May 2014 - 2.55pm

Paul was unsure about grouping up reuniting since Yoko and Paul were part of an affair and being together would run the risk of being caught!

 

(I think we should have two people before you can go again so no people take over story)

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Von Bontee
A Hole In The Road
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10 May 2014 - 3.00pm

(good idea!)

Ringo, meanwhile, was convinced he would get a nomination for a Best Actor Academy Award for his role in "Caveman!" and didn't want to make any immediate plans in case he had to attend the ceremony in March.

One day, a tape-op got a tape on backwards, he went to play it, and it was all "Neeeradno-undowarrroom" and it was "Wow! Sounds Indian!"
-- Paul McCartney

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MrMoonlight
Alone in the clouds all blue...
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10 May 2014 - 5.03pm

John was stoned.

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Starr Shine?
Waiting in the Sky
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10 May 2014 - 5.24pm

George was in front of the Dakota and since John was stoned and Yoko was with Paul no one responded so George busted down the door and yelled to John. "Hey we gonna do the Beatles thing or not?"

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ScrambledEggs
Behind the moon
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10 May 2014 - 5.28pm

"Do LSD?" replied John, whose mind was in deep search for a deeper meaning to life now that the reunion was established. It frightened him, and he needed a distraction.

George sighed in an annoyed manner. "Yer mad."

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Mr. Kite
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11 May 2014 - 2.48am

Of course they did do LSD (stoned John a-hard-days-night-john-2 is very convincing) and as their first trip was together, this reminded them of that. Once the drugs had worn off they had bonded and were ready to get the other boys to start rehearsing. They phoned Ringo: sadly No Reply, but they were sure they heard Paul and another voice next door!

(If I'm limited to three sentences I'm getting as much in as possible! ahdn_george_06)

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Starr Shine?
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11 May 2014 - 11.43am

John tried to walk over to investigate the other room when George said "hey I got a gear idea mate!"

 

John looked over and replied "What is it?"

 

George stood up and said "Lets create or own Harrison-Lennon songs while we wait for the others!"

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MrMoonlight
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11 May 2014 - 4.33pm

"Good idea," said John before an awkward silence - both men were wondering what to write about.

"Love!", screamed Paul telepathically, who had climbed in from the bathroom window holding a slightly moist Ringo bobblehead from 1964.

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Mr. Kite
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12 May 2014 - 1.06am

In the next room Yoko sits alone wondering why Paul just crawled through the hole in the wall.

As the first (actually second as I believe there is one they just didn't release) Lennonson (Johns ego was too big for Harrison-Lennon) song was starting to come to shape:
[Here comes the love... Doo doo doo doo
Here comes the love and I say, love is all you need!]
Ringo walked in the front door shouting, "I sense my bobble-head is damp don't you know it's dry clean only!?"

The Beatles were reunited!

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12 May 2014 - 2.40am

After a few hours of song making among the four lads from Liverpool, A knock was heard on the wall next to the door. (since George broke down the door a few hours ago) The four turned to the door frame though Paul quickly looked away when he saw that it was Yoko standing there with her 5 year old son Sean.

Yoko looked suprized and said "Hello John, What happened to the door while I was gone?"

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12 May 2014 - 1.19pm

George and Ringo popped round the door like in a Scooby Doo cartoon and simply looked at eachother when suddenly, something pushed John out of the way. Nobody knew who it was, since he was holding a copy of McCartney II to his head to make him look like Paul - removing it, he revealed himself as the one and only Paul! Everyone gasped at this, until Paul said "I would've gotten away with his if it wasn't for you meddling kids and your dumb drummer!"; Yoko screamed, as usual.

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likedreamersdo16
A Long and Winding Road
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17 May 2014 - 1.05am

"Gotten away with what?" Said Ringo, "Dampening my bobble head?".  "No." said Yoko, "This." She hold up a piece of paper that shows a ultrasound of an un-born baby; with Paul specified as the father.

"Being in the audience actually looks like quite a lot of fun." -Paul McCartney

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Starr Shine?
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17 May 2014 - 1.12am

John's face was ruby red and he was about to speak when. . .

A beautiful girl that all the beatles and Yoko instantly fell for appeared!

She had chestnut mid back length hair and alabaster skin and clear icey blue eyes and an amazing body and fantastic clothing that looked great on her and a winning personality! and this fine spesiman of lady said in a clear wonderful voice. . .

 

"Hey I'm Annadog40 which way is the room with the pregnat lady since I am a Doctor/Lawyer/Singer/Actor/President/Amazing?"

 

It's not a real Beatles story without a self insert/Mary Sue

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22 May 2014 - 10.30pm

They all pointed at Yoko without looking away from the woman, who was apparently Anna. She took out a portable ultrasound and it was then that they found out Yoko was carrying two babies! One was quite a bit bigger however, and this child assumed to be Paul's was actually Johns! The smaller baby was however Paul's!!!

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Across The Universe
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1 September 2014 - 11.27pm

At that instant Pete Best came charging into the room carrying a baseball bat and screaming "I hate you Ringo!!" while attempting to kill Ringo. Yoko started screaming which summoned the ghost of Stu Sutcliffe.

Look its a thingy! A fiendish thingy!

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thisbirdhasflown
Standing in the dock at Southhampton...
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1 September 2014 - 11.32pm

The ghost of Stu picked up a Hofner and began smashing Paul in the head. John shouts to George, "That looks like fun!" And they both smash the crap out of each other with Rickenbackers.

By hook or by crook, I'll be last in this book.

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1 September 2014 - 11.34pm

Ringo, wanting to join the fun, picks up his whole drum kick and starts bashing everyone in perfect 4/4 time.

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1 September 2014 - 11.37pm

At this point, Stu disappears and George realizes he's hurting his beautiful guitars. They all stop fighting except for Pete. Then Ringo utters, "I'm sorry! They chose me because I was better! I didn't mean to replace you!!" This causes Pete to cry and be leaves the room feeling defeated.

Now they have time to let the news of Yoko's double-pregnancy sink in...

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1 September 2014 - 11.41pm

The boys get together and decide that it was not worth it staying with Yoko. Immediately they made plans to escape from the Dakota. Later that night...

By hook or by crook, I'll be last in this book.

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