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1.32pm
27 February 2017
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Thanks for the feedback @Dark Overlord ! I agree with you; it certainly needs some improvement. Have you maybe got some specific suggestions?
And don’t mind about not being able to read sheet music, after all, the Beatles mainly played by ear themselves!
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1.37pm
1 November 2013
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The recording is a little hot which means it is a bit loud so I think turn the recording down on the Mic would help you get a cleaner sound.
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1.59pm
27 February 2017
Offline Thanks for the suggestion. Actually, I had to record it with my phone because I’m lacking any microphones. 
Maybe I could just stand farther away from the phone?
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2.44pm
10 March 2017
Offline I actually liked the tone you got, the tone sounds oddly like George’s reversed Strat in I’m Only Sleeping , although you could reduce the volume using Audacity by going into the amplify setting and doing that.
Also, if you want some recommendations, here they are:
1. I think the song should have guitars, bass, and drums, as well as possibly a keyboarded instrument, such as a piano or an organ as the main instruments, just like The Beatles did back in the day, so I think that any brass, woodwind, or orchestral strings should be in the background, although they are still a welcome addition.
2. If there is going to be a sax part, I think there also needs to be another brass/woodwind part, luckily for me The Hole Got Fixed plays French horn, so we got that going for us, but a trumpet and trombone would be preferred.
3. We need to start with a backing track, preferably of rhythm guitar, bass, and drums, before we add anything else.
4. If we can have an extended length, I’d be fine with having multiple instruments doing the solo, but otherwise, I think the guitar should get the solo.
5. I would gladly like to mix this song, as well as adding some instrumental contributions.
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2.49pm
1 November 2013
Offline You can reduce but it is much better to boost a slightly quiet recording then turn down a slightly loud recording.
So since some had problems with the lyrics proposed, anyone got some lyric ideas?
3.24pm
10 March 2017
Offline I got nothing, hopefully someone else does.
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4.19pm
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27 November 2016
Offline If I get all my work done in my free period early, I’ll give it a shot then. No promises though.
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8.21pm
11 April 2016
Offline Starr Shine? said
So since some had problems with the lyrics proposed, anyone got some lyric ideas?
I can try and think of something else if my other ones won’t work.
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10.45pm
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27 November 2016
Offline Or…. Everyone could chip in a few lines!
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10.47pm
11 April 2016
Offline ^^^ I think that might be a good idea, yeah. Maybe we could recycle a few lines from my set of lyrics.
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10.52pm
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27 November 2016
Offline Good idea. It would be sad to see your efforts go to waste! Maybe steal a few from Appleberry Army too.
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12.42pm
27 February 2017
Offline That sounds like a good plan so far. But what about specific forum members? Do we want to include their names or not?
Maybe we should decide on that question so we can avoid future discussions.
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1.22pm
1 November 2013
Offline I say no since active users change, like the users in 2013 were not the same as in 2015 or in 2017.
If any users are included, it should be Joe.
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27 November 2016
Offline Joe, and AG, mmm and Zig?
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5.08pm
1 November 2013
Offline Though mods change around as well. when I joined, meanmistermustard and Ahhh Girl weren’t mods.
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26 January 2017
Offline But were they both members?
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6.51pm
1 November 2013
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10 March 2017
Offline I wonder why you’re not a mod Starr Shine?, I think you would be a great mod and you are the 2nd biggest poster next to meanmistermustard. Also, why do you look like a slightly creepy puppet.
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9.11pm
14 June 2016
Offline I agree that we shouldn’t put specific user’s names in the song. It will end up in someone getting left out due to being forgotten in the list of names.
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9.41pm
1 November 2013
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