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Your Own Rewritten Lyrics
31 May 2014
4.20pm
MrMoonlight
Alone in the clouds all blue...
Rishikesh
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To practice lyric-writing, I'll sometimes add new verses to some of my favourite songs. It may be blasphemous to certain fans, but I enjoy it. Here's a new verse to Hey Jude:

Hey Jude, don't break my heart

Won't you find her, and don't forget her

Remember to let her into your mind

Then you will find you'll make it better.

Mal's got a mop and another glass of orange juice!
~He took the mirrors off his Cadillac
'Cause he doesn't like looking like he looks back~
31 May 2014
4.35pm
AppleScruffJunior
Sitting here, doing nothing but procrastinating
Apple rooftop
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do me love oh, whoa
do me love,oh ,Whoa
do me love,Yeah
do me love,Whoa
do me love,please So
true be always ll'I
you love I know You
do me love,Love

do me love,Whoa
do me love,please So
true be always ll'I
you love I know You
do me love,Love

love to Someone 

you like Someone 

new Somebody
love to Someone

do me love,Whoa
do me love,please So
true be always ll'I
you love I know You

do me love love

do me love,
do me love please So
true be always ll'I
you love I know You
do me love,love

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Mr. Kite
INTROVERTS UNITE! Separately.....In your own homes.----Make Love, Not Wardrobes!
31 May 2014
4.49pm
MrMoonlight
Alone in the clouds all blue...
Rishikesh
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A Day In The Life, my full version:

I read the news today, oh boy

About a lucky man who made the grade

And though the news was rather sad

Well I just had to laugh

I saw the photograph

 

He blew his mind out in a car

He didn't notice that the lights had changed

A crowd of people stood and stared

They'd seen his face before

Nobody was really sure if he was from the House of Lords

 

I saw a film today, oh boy

The English army had just won the war

A crowd of people turned away

But I just had to look

Having read the book

I'd love to turn you on

 

[crescendo]

 

Woke up, fell out of bed, dragged a comb across my head

Found my way downstairs and drank a cup

And looking up, I noticed I was late

Found my coat, grabbed my hat, made the bus in seconds flat

Found my way upstairs and had a smoke

And somebody spoke and I went into a dream

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (x2)

 

I read the news today, oh boy

About a man who'd wiped his face away

He left his kids and left his wife

To start another life

Away from all the strife

 

He said a free man should be free

So he packed up and fled the country

He left his family distraught

No battles to be fought

Nobody could tell if he was still the same man anymore

 

I heard a song today, oh boy

About a broken soul who stood alone

He watched the sunset from the edge

Looked from the dying light

To the endless night

I'd love to turn you on

 

[crescendo]

 

Woke up, climbed off the bus, made the station in a rush

Found my way around the passengers

And climbed aboard and sondered on the way

Pushed off, pulled away, and made today the day

Where I'd wear a mask and learn to smile

But I knew they'd see my tired eyes

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (x2)

 

I read the news today, oh boy

About a lonely man who'd found his grave

His house was lit up in a blaze

His mind was caught up in the haze

Nobody noticed him for days

 

His life was broken at sunrise

He only noticed when his fuel tank burst

He had no time to run away

And had no signs of life

Half a broken picture, charred and burnt, of his only wife

 

I found a love today, oh boy

We both looked back and then we locked our eyes

But a crowd of people blocked our gaze

Maybe I'll see one day, just show me the way

I'd love to turn you on

 

[crescendo]

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (x4)

 

I read the news today, oh boy

Four-thousand holes in Blackburn, Lancashire

And though the holes were rather small

They had to count them all

Now they know how many holes it takes to fill the Albert Hall

 

Well I just had to lose

Having read the news

I'd love to turn you on

 

[crescendo]

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Mr. Kite
Mal's got a mop and another glass of orange juice!
~He took the mirrors off his Cadillac
'Cause he doesn't like looking like he looks back~
1 June 2014
9.56pm
MrMoonlight
Alone in the clouds all blue...
Rishikesh
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New I'm Only Sleeping chorus:

Please don't bring me down,

I'm lost, you're found

And in the end, I'm Only Sleeping

Mal's got a mop and another glass of orange juice!
~He took the mirrors off his Cadillac
'Cause he doesn't like looking like he looks back~
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